Deviant Login Shop  Join deviantART for FREE Take the Tour
×



Details

Submitted on
December 27, 2012
Image Size
1.3 MB
Resolution
1648×2490
Link
Thumb
Embed

Stats

Views
362
Favourites
52 (who?)
Comments
25
Downloads
26
×
Hatsune Miku by hungry4ramen Hatsune Miku by hungry4ramen
Title originality over 9000

New style? owo
Since it's my first time doing something like this, I'll be asking for critiques :3

Tumblr link: [link]

:bulletblue:Credits:bulletred:
Art - *hungry4ramen
Miku - respective owners

Old Miku drawings
Add a Comment:
 
:iconmargaritatequila:
I have a tendency to write way too much, so I'll try to make this as short as possible. (i said try!) o3o;; Also, don't take any offense to whatever I might say - it's all for your improvement, which I can see a lot of in your recent drawings. So bear with me!

Her pose is very cute - matches well with the theme. I just wish there was more expression in her eyes - maybe if she had eyebrows it'd look better? Her neck is also a little too twisted back; if you really wanted her head to be that far back, her whole body should tilt back as well.

Her lower half looks good - I'm just wondering where her knees are.

I like how her bangs are quite spiky, but the main problem here is the ponytails. Her hair needs to flow a little bit more to look natural.

Let's start with ponytail A - the flow is fine, but the big crack on the left makes it look awkward, like her stylist was having a little too much fun with the hair gel and decided to shoot pens through it. It was a good experiment, but you should try to make the gaps smaller or try making gaps with thinner strands of hair. does that make any sense? o3o;;

Ponytail B - it looks as if her hair was naturally wavy and one side of the ponytail was straightened and the other was left natural. Try to be a little more consistent with your drawings! >3<

I have no problems with the colouring, well done! The blush in her cheek on her left is slightly lower than the one on her right, though. o3o I really like how you coloured her eyes, too. The highlights give a really glassy effect which makes it very aesthetically appealing!

The concept is really cute! I do like the very simple and girly background you've chosen. Overall, it's a very cute and pleasant drawing - it may not be detailed, but it's very nice.
What do you think?
The Artist thought this was FAIR
4 out of 4 deviants thought this was fair.

The Artist has requested Critique on this Artwork

Please sign up or login to post a critique.

:iconmiixter:
so cute nwn
Reply
:iconhungry4ramen:
hungry4ramen Dec 31, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you <3
Reply
:iconsmashbros2008:
SmashBros2008 Dec 31, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
You know what else is Over 9000?8D*Check where this was faved to*:iconmikula-plz:8D
Reply
:iconhungry4ramen:
hungry4ramen Dec 31, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
*O* thank you so much <33 it's greatly appreciated! I mean, over 9000 appreciated!

and oh! Judging by your name, you play Super Smash Bros? :>
Reply
:iconsmashbros2008:
SmashBros2008 Dec 31, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Hehe yesz, I play it all the time.xD:iconfalconyesplz:

:iconmikuhug1plz::iconmikuhug2plz::iconmikuhug3plz:
:iconmikuhug4plz::iconmikuhug5plz::iconmikuhug6plz:
:iconmikuhug7plz::iconmikuhug8plz::iconmikuhug9plz:
Reply
:iconiotaku96:
iotaku96 Dec 28, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
aww! so cute!
Reply
:iconhungry4ramen:
hungry4ramen Dec 28, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
<33 thank you!
Reply
:iconkailylove:
Kailylove Dec 28, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
it so cute love her item!
Reply
:iconhungry4ramen:
hungry4ramen Dec 28, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you so much!
Reply
Add a Comment: