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Hatsune Miku by hungry4ramen Hatsune Miku by hungry4ramen
Title originality over 9000

New style? owo
Since it's my first time doing something like this, I'll be asking for critiques :3

Tumblr link: [link]

:bulletblue:Credits:bulletred:
Art - *hungry4ramen
Miku - respective owners

Old Miku drawings
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I have a tendency to write way too much, so I'll try to make this as short as possible. (i said try!) o3o;; Also, don't take any offense to whatever I might say - it's all for your improvement, which I can see a lot of in your recent drawings. So bear with me!

Her pose is very cute - matches well with the theme. I just wish there was more expression in her eyes - maybe if she had eyebrows it'd look better? Her neck is also a little too twisted back; if you really wanted her head to be that far back, her whole body should tilt back as well.

Her lower half looks good - I'm just wondering where her knees are.

I like how her bangs are quite spiky, but the main problem here is the ponytails. Her hair needs to flow a little bit more to look natural.

Let's start with ponytail A - the flow is fine, but the big crack on the left makes it look awkward, like her stylist was having a little too much fun with the hair gel and decided to shoot pens through it. It was a good experiment, but you should try to make the gaps smaller or try making gaps with thinner strands of hair. does that make any sense? o3o;;

Ponytail B - it looks as if her hair was naturally wavy and one side of the ponytail was straightened and the other was left natural. Try to be a little more consistent with your drawings! >3<

I have no problems with the colouring, well done! The blush in her cheek on her left is slightly lower than the one on her right, though. o3o I really like how you coloured her eyes, too. The highlights give a really glassy effect which makes it very aesthetically appealing!

The concept is really cute! I do like the very simple and girly background you've chosen. Overall, it's a very cute and pleasant drawing - it may not be detailed, but it's very nice.
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MiiXteR Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2012
so cute nwn
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hungry4ramen Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2012
thank you <3
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MiiXteR Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2012
no prob
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SmashBros2008 Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
You know what else is Over 9000?8D*Check where this was faved to*:iconmikula-plz:8D
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hungry4ramen Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2012
*O* thank you so much <33 it's greatly appreciated! I mean, over 9000 appreciated!

and oh! Judging by your name, you play Super Smash Bros? :>
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SmashBros2008 Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Hehe yesz, I play it all the time.xD:iconfalconyesplz:

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iotaku96 Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
aww! so cute!
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hungry4ramen Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012
<33 thank you!
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Kailylove Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
it so cute love her item!
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hungry4ramen Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012
thank you so much!
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Kailylove Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
no problem! ^^
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MoonwolfYouthOtaku Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
KAWAIIIII <3!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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hungry4ramen Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012
Arigato! <3
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MoonwolfYouthOtaku Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
No prob =)
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stephaniescarlet Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012
she looks cute ^^
i really like how you shade, and i love the background! :D
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hungry4ramen Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012
<333 thank you so much~ I'm glad you like it!
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versamajor Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
dude. when i saw this..i thought it was from some other pro anime artist :O
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hungry4ramen Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012
omg u high
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versamajor Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
dude no. srsly..its kewl..

or is it just the shading and background

papaswang x pitch.

hey.

did u know tat the strangers didnt win any awards for the film fest
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hungry4ramen Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012
lol no u super high

lol yes ikr

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why'd u fav it man
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versamajor Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
no. i appreciate you :iconpervyplz:



because Frost said so. problem?
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hungry4ramen Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012
:iconuhuhuhuplz: frost would never say such things
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versamajor Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
He would :iconmegustaplz:
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ViimaMiu Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2012  Hobbyist
awww, she's so cute :) love the leek miku is holding :)
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hungry4ramen Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2012
<3 thank you! I'm glad you like it :3
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